Writing alerts
Alerts should clearly summarise what’s happened and what a user needs to do.
Follow these rules:
- Use sentence case
- 2–5 words for headings
- 1–2 sentences of text
- Use short, active phrases for headings – ‘Get support’, not ‘Where to get support’
- Provide action buttons when appropriate
- Clear actions – ‘Retry’ is better than ‘OK’
- Clear headings – ‘Check the amount’ is better than ‘Important’
- Avoid bullets, paragraphs or text hyperlinks
Example:
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❌ We strongly recommend you receive financial advice or guidance before making any decisions that may affect your retirement. Get help now.
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✅ Getting advice We recommend getting financial advice or guidance before continuing.
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Wordy and vague |
Short and specific |